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MDIA2091 Assessment One: Essay
Assessment & Weighting |
Length |
Due date |
Feedback |
Essay (40%) |
1500-2000 words |
Friday, July 4, 2023 11:59 PM (Week 5) |
Rubric and comments via Moodle Grademark |
Question
Writing this essay involves an analysis phase (1) and a writing phase (2):
1. Analysis phase:
. Use the App Walkthrough Method to analyse a mobile app of your choice.
. You should use the worksheet you were provided with in Tutorial 2 to document your walkthrough.
. As you undertake your walkthrough, track the data the app collects about you as a user.
. Think about how it may be using this data to create a model of you and your attributes (e.g., your preferences and behaviours).
. Consider the types of data the app collects, its data privacy practices, and the impact of these practices on user autonomy and control.
2. Writing phase:
Using specific examples from your walkthrough analysis, answer the following question:
“Affordances are not fixed but ultimately imagined properties whose meaning and function emerges ‘in the wild’ through how people perceive and make sense of technologies, what they enable and make possible, and what their limitations are.”
(Schellewald, 2023:1569)
Reflecting on this quote, and the course concepts introduced in weeks 1-5, do you think the affordances of an app/platform can alter and influence the way a user acts? Or do you think that a user always has full control and understanding over the use of an app/platform?
Remember, these issues will be different depending on the kind of app you have chosen and its domain (e.g., health, entertainment, social connection, work etc.). Draw on relevant scholarly literature to support your claims about what they key social and ethical issues are in the particular domain.
How to include a screen capture or diagram in your essay
In order to explain your analysis you will need to include diagrams and/or screen captures from your walkthrough in your essay. You should present these as figures with captions as follows:
Figure 1: An example of a screen capture of the Paprika recipe management app recipe page.
Depending on what you are explaining to the reader, you may like to annotate the screen capture (e.g. with arrows and labels).
Use figures only when you are making a substantial point in your essay. You should limit figures to 3-4 in the body of the essay. If more are needed they should be included in an appendix.
GAI Statement
All students must include a GAI statement at the end of their submission.
Not using GAI:
“I have not used GAI in the creation of this submission.”
Using GAI at any stage:
“I have used [GAI tool] in the creation of this submission. I have used it for [provide details of use here].”
Please replace the text in the square brackets with details specific to your own use.
Referencing
You should cite external sources using Harvard referencing:
https://student.unsw.edu.au/harvard-referencing
Submission
Submit your assignment via Turn-it-in on Moodle by the due date (see table on first page).
Marking criteria
The table below is the qualitative rubric used as a guide in marking your essay:
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F |
P |
C |
D |
HD |
Expression: The extent to which your writing is fluent, concise, and coherent |
Incoherent and poorly written. Highly problematic in writing style and/or grammar and structure. Obtrusive errors. Likely to be well outside the word count - either too short, or longwinded. No GAI statement. |
Weaker writing of patchy quality with some obvious errors in referencing style, and/or grammar and/or structure. GAI statement included, but limited information provided. |
Sound writing style. Adequate structure. Some (less obtrusive) errors in style, grammar, and structure. GAI statement included. |
Mature and generally assured academic style of writing that is well structured and that poses few problems for readers. Few errors in style, and grammar. Within word count. Well edited. GAI statement included. |
Exceptionally well- written. Characterised by a sophisticated academic voice with very few (or no) errors in style, grammar, and structure. Within word count. Skilfully edited. Beautifully presented. GAI statement included. |
Argument: The extent to which your argument is clear, logical, and directly answers the question. |
A poorly discussed argument is likely to be seriously stunted, fragmented, and/or incoherent. Little to no sense of a logical connection to the question. |
A weak argument with a limited logical connection to the question. Displays some significant gaps in understanding. |
A relatively thoughtful discussion of a partially developed argument that is marked by some oversights. Some worthwhile connections made to the question. |
A well- reasoned argument that displays few gaps in thinking. Directly answers the question. |
An exquisitely developed, thoroughly defended, and fully coherent argument that directly answers the question. |
Concepts: The extent to which you demonstrated a grasp of key concepts and used them to answer the question. |
Demonstrates a poor understanding of the key concepts in the question. |
Demonstrates an understanding of the key concepts in the question but makes some conceptual errors. |
Demonstrates a good understanding of the key concepts in the question. |
Demonstrates an excellent understanding of the key concepts in the question |
Demonstrates a highly sophisticated understanding of the key concepts in the question |
FAQs
1. Do I need to cite sources in the essay?
Yes, you should cite sources and include a full bibliography. Please use Harvard referencing: https://www.student.unsw.edu.au/citing-different-sources
2. Is my bibliography include in the word count?
No, your bibliography is not included in the word count.
3. Can I write within +/- 10% of the word count?
It is a good idea to stick as closely to the word count as you can out of respect for your tutor's time. However within +/- 10% is an acceptable margin
4. Do you require a certain number of references, ideas, or other phenomena?
If we require a certain number of anything, that will always be in the question. So if we do not specify a number for something, then we will not penalise you if you don't do a certain number of instances of that thing. We are always assessing you on the extent to which you demonstrate that you understand the material, rather than on arbitrary things like whether you did a certain thing X number of times.
5. Do I need to cite the lectures in the essay?
No, this would become untenable in a written essay so you are only required to cite the author whose idea you are using in your response. You don't need to cite the lecture in which I taught you about this particular author's ideas. You also don't need to cite the particular lecture I mentioned general key concepts as this would be very repetitive.
6. Do I attach my walkthrough worksheet to the essay?
No, this would likely make a file that is too big to upload. The worksheet just serves as your systematic data collection tool.
NB: Check the Moodle Essay FAQ section nearer to the due date as I may update it if there are other questions that are asked that I haven't thought of here!